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Pickles
Tracker
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Pickles


Male
Number of posts : 492
Age : 29
Location : Somewhere far, but yet, close.
Registration date : 2008-09-01

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PostSubject: A million miles away *poem*   A million miles away *poem* EmptyThu Oct 30, 2008 9:05 pm

I’m standing at a crossroad,
My lover in my arms.
I know were will have to separate,
One goes one way, to the other the other way.

I listen to her breathing,
I hear her cry a silent sob.
My love,
My life.

Her soft hair feels like a sin across my face,
So pure, untouchable.
I turn her around in my arms,
We’re now face to face.

I can feel her soft breath upon my face,
Her eyes set upon mine.
I say unto her
“We must go…”

I feel the tears drip down my face,
The idea of leaving her stings at my heartstrings.
I push her away, wiping away the tear,
I care more than she thinks.
But my caring makes me leave.

I walk along the path that leads to bad,
Letting her take the one for good.
I don’t look back at her,
But I hear her, I hear her still.

I walk alone, down the lonely wide path,
Leaving her the narrow.
Heaven and hell will separates us.
Good and evil.

I miss her even now, now that I can still hear her,
She’s clinging to the memories.
I feel her hair across my face,
A memory what seemed like so long ago.

The path stayed straight,
I hear her no more.
I turn,
I do not see her.

I search down into my soul,
And I find that flame still burning.
The love still burns on,
Even though we’re a million miles away.
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Pure Insanity
Healer
Healer
Pure Insanity


Female
Number of posts : 5289
Age : 29
Location : Wondering why I am there
Registration date : 2008-09-02

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PostSubject: Re: A million miles away *poem*   A million miles away *poem* EmptyFri Oct 31, 2008 1:02 pm

Aw kiddo ...

S' really well written, and real sad Sad


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shadow
High Priestess
shadow


Female
Number of posts : 9316
Age : 29
Location : Outside, staring at the sky, wondering.
Registration date : 2008-07-21

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PostSubject: Re: A million miles away *poem*   A million miles away *poem* EmptySat Nov 01, 2008 1:05 am

Awww, such a nice, well written poem! My poetry teacher would be proud of this and that's saying something...
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Gryffindorgal4hp
Higher magician
Higher magician
Gryffindorgal4hp


Female
Number of posts : 3930
Age : 30
Location : Adam Lambert's arms
Registration date : 2008-08-01

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PostSubject: Re: A million miles away *poem*   A million miles away *poem* EmptySat Nov 01, 2008 1:52 am

SOOOOOOO BRILLIANT MATTY!

love it Smile

LucyXX
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