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Pi-Face
High Priest
Pi-Face


Male
Number of posts : 3324
Age : 28
Location : SCARLET CLOUDS, YAAAAY
Registration date : 2009-02-02

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PostSubject: Val Keshra.   Val Keshra. EmptyFri Feb 06, 2009 8:58 am

Name: Val Keshra Intunosis.
Nicknames: Val (Kaera).
Species: Terax.
Path: Redeamer.
Age: 154. No signs of age, except slight wrinkles under his eyes.
Gender: Androgyn male.
Good, Evil, Neutral?: Extremely neutral. Except that he utterly despises that we insult him because of his armor or race.
Appearance:
Terax: The Terax are very feeble creatures, who have gone into high technology very fast. They have human-like arms, with 4-fingered hands, they have bird-like legs with 3 articulations, and with bird-like feet at the end, but thicker and no claws. Their head has an elongated cranium, with eyes that almost hide themselves behind thick eyelids. They have no apparent mouth, but two holes at both sides of their jaw. They communicate by gritting the teeth situated in their neck. They can almost speak english, with a heavy accent, though, but comprehensible. They also have a long chin, and a baggy neck. The Terax have greyish skin, with a very faint taint of blue, but almost unnoticable.

Val Keshra Intunosis: Val Keshra doesn't have anything out of the ordinary from the other Terax, except his bicoloured eyes. His right eye is yellow whilst his left eye is blue.

History:
Val Keshra lead a normal Teraxian life. Grow up. Get educated. Choose a path. Train. Enroll into the military forces. Fight against the black death of the galaxy, the Dest. Until the other Terax find a lifetime task for them.
Val Keshar's lifetime task was to protect a baby girl from her father, who wanted to trigger an armaggedon war on the planet Earth, in year 2264. And without the planet Earth, the Terax would be hopeless, since they depend a lot on human forces to kill the ravaging Dest. He kidnapped the girl, who was 4 years old, and went back in time to the year 1995. Val Keshra lived with the girl until whe was 19 years old (in 2008), and that's when Val Keshra told her about what she has to do. The infant, confused, ran away. Val Keshra had to find her again, before it was too late.

Powers:
Ah, powers.
Val Keshra has telekinetic powers, like every Terax. He sends powerful brain waves at a certain object to make it bend, levitate, move. He also has decupled strength, because of his training for his path of Redeamer.

Personality:
Val Keshra is a very calm person, if we may call him that. Extremely protective, and so egoist he only cares about others than his own body. He may risk his life for another person in danger, as the way of the redeamer. But he actually despises that we insult him because of his race or his armor. He always calls himself as 'We', because he is one, and his armor is another. At times where he's really angry, he takes off his armor, and finally calls himself 'I'.

Hobbies: Redeamer training, Prayers.
Job: Messenger, as one term, assassin, as another.
Relations (Family): None for the past 15 years. He is completely alone on Earth.
Relations (Spouses): None.
Best Friends: Kaera Tsuni.

Accent: Teraxian accent. Probably, like, unnoticeable.
Distinguishing Features: Bicoloured eyes. Right is yellow, left is blue.
Special Abilites: Advanced telekinesis.
Likes: None.
Dislikes: Getting insulted.
Fears: None. That's a true redeamer.
Habits: Counting stars.

Sample RP post:


'Preposterous child! How do you dare insult us, the almighty Terax! You will pay for this stupid act!' Val Keshra was angry. His eyed flared with fury. He muttered, 'Your life ends now.' and he crouched into an attack position. He used his powerful telekinetic abilities to move him without moving his arms or legs. He quickly arrived at the human's feet, where he bounded up with his reverse blade, cutting him in half.

Explanation: K.
The Terax, at the age of 25, have to take a path amongst those listed. Redeamer (the basic warrior), Soothsayer (the medic) or Sharpshooter (the infantry).

The path of a redeamer is a 10-year training. First year, we learn how to control the body itself, not let any reflex intervene. Second year, we train with the chosen Redeamer weapon, the reverse blades, wielded the wrong side, as to put the blade on the arm, instead of on the outside, like we do with swords. In third year, we train hunger resistance. Fourth year, pain resistance. Fifth year, mental resistance (Val Keshra wasn't really good at that.). Sixth year, we train telekinesis. And the four left years are for training on the way of the reverse blades.
At the end of the tenth year, the Terax receive a golden armor, called the relinquished. It accutes the power of telekinesis by a crystal situated at the back of the armor, and transferred to every part of the body. Bust, arms, legs, back.


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shadow
High Priestess
shadow


Female
Number of posts : 9316
Age : 30
Location : Outside, staring at the sky, wondering.
Registration date : 2008-07-21

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PostSubject: Re: Val Keshra.   Val Keshra. EmptyFri Feb 06, 2009 10:17 pm

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Pi-Face
High Priest
Pi-Face


Male
Number of posts : 3324
Age : 28
Location : SCARLET CLOUDS, YAAAAY
Registration date : 2009-02-02

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PostSubject: Re: Val Keshra.   Val Keshra. EmptyWed Apr 08, 2009 6:32 pm

Revamped a little Val Keshra's BIO.
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whilaroo
High Priest
whilaroo


Male
Number of posts : 604
Location : In the back of this junky old station wagon...
Registration date : 2009-04-04

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PostSubject: Re: Val Keshra.   Val Keshra. EmptyWed Apr 08, 2009 11:37 pm

If you will permit my saying so, I like this immensely, and the little sprite is so cool.

I don't know if this is what you intended but I get a sort of haunting jedi feeling about him. Perhaps something like a Bourne Jedi, if that's possible...
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Pi-Face
High Priest
Pi-Face


Male
Number of posts : 3324
Age : 28
Location : SCARLET CLOUDS, YAAAAY
Registration date : 2009-02-02

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PostSubject: Re: Val Keshra.   Val Keshra. EmptyThu Apr 09, 2009 7:59 am

whilaroo wrote:
If you will permit my saying so, I like this immensely, and the little sprite is so cool.

I don't know if this is what you intended but I get a sort of haunting jedi feeling about him. Perhaps something like a Bourne Jedi, if that's possible...
Well, I guess I know why you have this feeling:
Val Keshra is, after all, a religious fanatic. He uses blades (just like the Jedis and Siths) and uses the reversively (Like some Jedis and Siths). He also uses telekinesis, which resembles much to 'The Force'.
Also, his way of training seems like one of a Jedi or Sith. Val Keshra was first based on Darth Vader, but then I turned him into an extra life form, gave a little medeival but still futuristic feeling to him, gave him something cool and recognizable (The 2 bicoloured eyes) and tadaa, Val Keshra was born.
Then I just tweaked him here and there, and now he's like that.

Now, for the sprite thing: Well, I've got some talents in spriting, but I mostly trained (I started spriting in 2005 xD)
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